Thursday, February 15, 2018

EXCERPT: Awake in the Night Land

This is a selection from John C. Wright's incredible classic, AWAKE IN THE NIGHT LAND. If you have not yet had the very great pleasure of reading it yet, you are fortunate indeed. Read the reviews, lest you think I exaggerate.

The monsters still howl for him, months after he fell. In the gloom, I can sometimes see one or the other, sometimes both together, wolfish beasts with leathery hides and dark bristles, and they raise their grinning, shark-like mouths to the black clouds above and utter their cries.

Impossible that such horrors could love a child of Man, and be faithful; impossible. Yet they do not molest the body, nor even approach it.

My brother Polynices lies in plain view on the baked black salt of the Night Land. The hollow where he fell has a smoke-hole in its center, some five yards beyond his motionless, outflung hand, and the smolder from the hole casts a light across his form.

He lies many miles below the armored windows of our redoubt, but even so, the spy-glasses and instruments of the Monstruwacans (those scholars whose business it is to watch the horrors of the Night) leaning from the balconies, can pick out minute details.

The fingers of his gauntlet are stretched out, as if he were reaching for the little warmth of the smoke hole as he perished. He lays on a slight incline, for a circle of salty mineral surrounds the smoke hole and slopes toward it. His boots are toward us. The smoke hole is to his left. His helmet fell from his head, and rolled a yard down the salty slope. The little trail the helmet made as it fell is still visible. There has been no wind, no earth tremors, to disturb the salt crystals and erode the trail. The haft and great wheel of his disk-ax weapon lay to his right, and the shadow of his body falls across it, making details difficult to make out, even under the immense magnifications of the Great Spy Glass. The hair I used to tousle has continued to grow as the months have passed, and now falls across the shoulder-plates of his armor and spills onto the salt. I cannot see those wild locks without wishing for my comb of nacre to put the tangles right. He was always careless of his appearance.

Because of the angle of his fall, I cannot make out his face. Did he die calmly? Or is a rictus of hollow terror and despair frozen forever on his features?

His right forearm is hidden under his body, as if his teeth were seeking the lethal capsule buried under the flesh of his forearm when he fell. Did he fall too swiftly to bite the capsule, and slay himself wholesomely, before his soul and spirit were Destroyed?

There is no blood visible. There is no sign of wounds.

When we were young, my brother and I found a long-deserted balcony lock, and from a previous life he remembered the word to open it.

He and I would climb through the broken armor of the window in one of the abandoned cities in the base level of the Pyramid. With fearless hearts and unsteady feet we would pick among the tilted slabs of imperishable metal, and find a little niche, about five hundred yards above the Night Land, open to the thin air and stinking fumes. We would sit with our lunch basket and spyglass on the corroded lip of some ancient corbel, our legs dangling and kicking above the smoke and darkness of the Land, and we would hear the voices of monsters muttering and hissing underfoot, see the glinting eyes of remote and cyclopean faces, or feel the dull throb of their malice beating against the sheath of energized air surrounding the Pyramid.

There was a series of irregular stairs leading down and down from a little ways below that spot, but we never dared to venture down.

I remember I wore short-pants then, like a boy’s. During my childhood, before I had a name, I was called Païs or Meirax, or something of the sort; the servants called me Annasa, of course.

Because my father was the Castellan, the nurses and tutors had no credible threat to make when I defied them, or tore my girlish pink bloomers to shreds. Later, when I was old enough to know what grief my antics caused my father, or what pleasure my father’s critics in the Opposition Seats, I dressed more demurely outwardly, though inwardly, I suppose, I was much the same.

From the steles we found on that hidden cleft, at the top of those forbidden stairs, we knew this place had been made by the Labdaciteans, great-grandfather’s people. The locks recognized our life-patterns, and called us by his name.

We knew the tale. Before even grandfather was born, Labdacus eroded the power of the Architects, by making climbing paths not shown on their charts, to run from window to window between the levels, that his loyal retainers might circumvent the blockades, when Architects cut power to the inter-municipal Doors, or grounded the great Lifts. Grandfather Laius, when he came of age, rose to preeminence on the promise that all such unlawful paths and places would be destroyed, and the Last Redoubt brought once more into honest conformity with the Great Central Survey of the Architectural Order.

As an adult, I know the horror of wondering if there is some gallery, portal, or open window, unwatched and unlocked against the subtle malice of the enemy, a hole a spider could wriggle through, or a crack to admit a weft. Even we, young as we were, were scandalized to see the breach of Labdacus. His crime was solid before our eyes, as plain to touch as the smooth hole cut in the armor. The massive, ill-made blocks of crooked stair lead down from it as a blood trail leads down from a wound. But it was a pleasing scandal, and our fear made us grin sickly grins, for it was our great-grandfather who had committed, not a petty crime, but a great one.

We promised each other we would never do anything so wicked as meddle with the walls and wards by which Man lives.

But we were also pleased to have a secret known to none, a place only those of the blood of Labdacus could pass. We considered our promise fulfilled by vowing to tell no one of our find. The idea that we should have immediately sent for the Architects, or the local Officer of the Watch, never crossed our young minds.

We were the children of the Castellan, after all.

Not long after my age of majority, not long after my father’s death and the ascension of Creon to power, I came to tread these same broken slabs of ancient metal again.

This time, my footsteps were not as sure as a thoughtless child’s would have been, nor was my costume as suited for the adventure. I wore a skirt to my ankles and a blouse buttoned to my throat, and my hair was pinned up and coiffed in a fashion I envied when it was forbidden to me, but which was now a bother to dress and maintain. My gloves clutched the corroded wall as I inched in my foolishly heeled shoes across the sloping face of the armor, a dizzying drop to the lands of darkness opening up behind and below my bustle.

The child I had been would not have known me. Païs had been so unafraid, and I was so fearful now.
Once only I looked over my shoulder. In the light of a recent volcano, I could glimpse the tall shadows of two kiln-giants, their heads together as if in consultation. One of them raised a heavy hand and pointed at me, while its lamp-eyed companion nodded. This unnerved me, so I clutched the metal beneath my gloves more firmly, and returned my eyes to the task.

I made it around the last turn and came with relief to the sturdier footing and broader step of the ancient and unused corbel.

Polynices was in his armor, standing where once he’d lunched as a child. The long handle of his disk-ax weapon was in his hand, and he leaned upon it in an attitude of alertness, his head staring down at the darkened Land.

He was listening.

Up from the gloom underfoot came the mournful, haunting sound of a Night-Hound, baying.
Having found his hiding place, I did not wish to speak, lest I startle him. I had the mental image of him dropping his Diskos over the side, or, worse, himself.

He said, “Rightly or wrongly, the dogs are mine, and I must feed them.”

I said quietly, “They are monsters. They are howling because they thirst for your blood, not because they love you.”

Polynices shook his head grimly, not bothering to look back at me. “Draego saved my life from the Abhumans. I fed him from my hand, and he knows not how to eat from any other. See! Even now he will not hunt among the crags and chasms of the Night Land, or worry pale flesh of slug-things from their lightless holes or blind fish from poisoned lakes. He starves, and stands before the gates of the Last Redoubt, and howls his love and sorrow for me. Dracaina is often with him, and joins her weeping voice to his.”

“Monsters. Do you not understand the word? Enemies of Man.”

“Not these. Love can break even the power of the Night. My dogs are my friends.”

“They are not dogs! They are Night-Hounds!”

He said nothing, but listened to the mournful howling of the monsters far below.

On and on they wailed. Once, both Night-Hounds fell silent, when the Great Laughter began to issue from a buried country to the east, a deep trench whose upper crumbling banks are visible from the Last Redoubt. Another time, the Hounds were silenced again when a deep and monstrous Voice from a cold volcano cone called out in a long-forgotten language, uttering a rough shout that traveled and echoed across the Night Land like a clap of thunder, traveling away to the North. The Night-Hounds were hushed for a while, perhaps cowering in terror, but then their howling and lamenting began again.

“I had a dream that you would die.” I told him.

He said, “I will find a way to smuggle food out to them. I do not fear the law.”

The Great Laughter issued from the eastern hills and canyons at that moment, trembling across the strange and barren landscapes of the Night, and this seemed a fitter answer than anything I could devise.

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Blogger Solaire Of Astora February 15, 2018 8:38 PM  

I bought this the other day. Is familiarity with Hodgson's work important?

Blogger Tallen February 15, 2018 8:50 PM  

I bought this the other day. Is familiarity with Hodgson's work important?

Not at all. I bought it knowing nothing of the source material and it's definitely a 5/5 review. I hope it gets made into an Arkhaven comic or graphic novel.

Anonymous Anonymous February 15, 2018 8:52 PM  

This book is a haunting masterpiece. I am not sure how he comes up with the concepts or captures them with words. If you have not read Mr. Wright yet, start with this one.

Blogger VD February 15, 2018 8:53 PM  

Is familiarity with Hodgson's work important?

Not in the least. It would be better to read Hodgson afterwards.

Blogger David The Good February 15, 2018 8:59 PM  

This book will soon be in audio as well. It's a masterpiece.

Blogger Steve February 15, 2018 9:22 PM  

Solaire - You don't need to read Hodgson, it's a self-contained novel.

AWAKE IN THE NIGHT LAND is one of the few books that haunts my imagination long after reading it. THE BOOK OF THE NEW SUN, THE LORD OF THE RINGS, THE ROAD and LANARK are some of the others.

It's a stunning work, so much so I struggle to do it justice with the debased currency of mere praise. It deserves much more than that, it deserves to be read and shared and cherished.

Everything just works in this book. The strange, dreadful nightscape of the world outside the Last Redoubt, the Victorian-era heroic sensibilities of JCW's protagonists, the vastness of its narrative arc... but most importantly, the emotional heft it carries. Most books are glib or flimsy or - worst of all - infested with snark and irony.

JCW is sincere. His stories matter, because they paint real human emotions, honestly and without fear. NIGHT LAND is full of dread and faith, courage and cowardice, strength and weakness, hatred and love and holding on to the very end.

Blogger Solaire Of Astora February 15, 2018 9:34 PM  

Thanks, I'll start reading it right away then.

Blogger Starboard February 15, 2018 9:43 PM  

Reading Mr. Hodgson's The Night Land before hand was not necessary, but I did finish it. The problem with Hodgson's Night Land is that he repeats himself and his language is often awkward to our modern ears. It's not a difficult read, but it is a bit of a quest. I kept with it because the Night Land itself is one of the strongest characters, and I may be a bit stubborn.

I read Mr. Wright's Awake in the Night Land and highly, highly recommend it. I would add more praise, but really it's ditto what Steve said.

I never thought much about what a horror it would be not to look for the second coming of Christ. What if we were doomed to survive until the last spark of energy in the universe faded away?

Blogger Nate February 15, 2018 10:06 PM  

This is one of the greatest literary works from America in the last hundred years

Blogger Biggie February 15, 2018 10:20 PM  

It's good, but the whole thing kinda falls apart in the last act. I think "The Last of All Suns" is the only story not edited by

Blogger Biggie February 15, 2018 10:20 PM  

... edited by Gardner Dozois.

Blogger Amos Bellomy February 15, 2018 10:25 PM  

Awake in the Night Land will go down as John C. Wright's greatest achievement.

Blogger Nate February 15, 2018 11:01 PM  

"It's good, but the whole thing kinda falls apart in the last act."

you have lost your mind.

Blogger Stg58/Animal Mother February 15, 2018 11:22 PM  

OT: The Chicago Stock Exchange is run by total fucking morons.

Thank God Hillary isn't president.

Blogger Amos Bellomy February 15, 2018 11:38 PM  

The final line of the final story is one of the greatest final lines ever written.

Blogger Forge the Sky February 16, 2018 12:12 AM  

Honestly, this is the best book I've read since 'Joseph and his Brothers.' Which was the best book I've read since 'The Lord of the Rings.'

@1 - just to elaborate on Vox, JCW kinda summarizes what you might need to know in the prologue. You'd probably be fine even without that though. I've tried to read the original, and it is good, but holy heck does it carry on sometimes. JCW is much more effective in the end.

If I have a criticism of Mr. Wright, it's that his imagination tends to roam too broadly; he gathers influences and themes from diverse places and smashes them together. Sometimes it works well, as with the chaos of the Tower in 'Somewhither;' other times, it just dilutes things, as in 'Swan Knight's Son.' (The sequel trilogy already shows improvement, however.) However, when given proper bounds - as in this work, where he's forced to operate under the constraints of a pre-made setting and mood - his output goes from 'quite entertaining' to 'truly brilliant.'

Blogger Forge the Sky February 16, 2018 12:17 AM  

"It's good, but the whole thing kinda falls apart in the last act."

No, it's different but still quality. But the penultimate line is a bit heavy-handed, and kinda breaks the mood of the whole thing.

I wasn't expecting to have flashbacks to evangelical-college days in this work of all things.

Blogger Txdino February 16, 2018 12:46 AM  

One of the few books I have read that I still contemplate the imagery it evoked in my mind. The story and the tension of the plot are compelling.

Blogger Allabaster February 16, 2018 12:54 AM  

Yeah, of the stories I remember enjoying the first one the most.

The original story I have not yet finished, after the 10th night of stopping to eat the tablets and drink the water while she did something naughty I had to set it aside.

Blogger L. Jagi Lamplighter Wright February 16, 2018 1:49 AM  

@9 -- None of these stories were edited by Dozois.

They were originally edited by Andy Robertson--which is an amazing story in its own right. Vox has posted it, but I repost it here:

Blogger Harambe February 16, 2018 1:50 AM  

VD wrote:Is familiarity with Hodgson's work important?

Not in the least. It would be better to read Hodgson afterwards.

Not that it matters much, but I agree. Hodgson falls into a bit of a slog in the middle of the book where it's nothing but walking, foot fetishes and drinking water and eating rations. Awake in the Night Land has all the awesome parts and introduces even more awesomeness.

In my opinion Wright's book is superior.

Blogger Harambe February 16, 2018 1:56 AM  

Nate wrote:"It's good, but the whole thing kinda falls apart in the last act."

you have lost your mind.

The house of Silence will do that to you

Blogger bob kek mando February 16, 2018 2:22 AM  

unfortunately, the web site is down.

fortunately, it seems to be on the Wayback machine.

Blogger David Power February 16, 2018 3:24 AM  

Off topic but hopefully note nought to get spammed...

UK's Channel 4 has a new ad campaign running. Scroll through to the last one at (2:10) it's a doozy....

Blogger pdwalker February 16, 2018 5:00 AM  

Mr. Hodgson's The Night Land is a heck of a slog to read. Their is brilliance in the world he created, but you have persevere to get it.

Mr Wright’s work takes this brilliant gems and polishes them to a fine sheen. All the brilliance and none of the slog. The book still haunts me, and it’s been several years since I’ve read it.

As for the last act? Brilliant. It’s that kind of writing that requires, no make that, forces me me to buy his books, just because.

Blogger wreckage February 16, 2018 7:40 AM  

I can understand finding the sentence in question jarring, but the moment is structurally perfect nonetheless.

I can't think of words that would convey how great Wright's work is, or how beautifully and sympathetically it completes the original story... which, incidentally, I really liked.

Very few fantastic works really convey strangeness like the original, the weird language and odd narrative structure, I found, added to that.

Blogger SouthRon February 16, 2018 7:58 AM  

Awake in the Night Land is written in the darkest, most suffocating and oppressive environment ever penned and yet brings more hope to the human soul than anything written since the Apostle John. Such is the talent of John C. Wright and this book captures his art perfectly.

Blogger Harambe February 16, 2018 8:24 AM  

Here's a fun challenge from John C Wright himself: try to guess which of the stories he wrote as an atheist, and which he wrote after becoming a Christian. You can probably cheat and use google, but that's not the point.

Anonymous Anonymous February 16, 2018 9:43 AM  

For those who find Hodgson's artificially archaic language a bit too much to slog through in the original Night Land, there is an excellent rewrite by James Stoddard in "The Night Land: A Story Retold".

Blogger VFM #7634 February 16, 2018 2:20 PM  

Here's a fun challenge from John C Wright himself: try to guess which of the stories he wrote as an atheist, and which he wrote after becoming a Christian. You can probably cheat and use google, but that's not the point.

@27 Harambe
I'm guessing the last one was a later one, because it appeared to have more imagination and thought put into it. The one about the hellhounds and the female explorer were while he was an atheist. The other one involving the male explorer with his father's ghost I think may have been when he was Christian.

Blogger DrRansom February 16, 2018 3:42 PM  

Have read multiple times. Very, very good, one of my all-time favorites.

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